Jane Frances, 'Reunion'
Nov. 27th, 2011 03:06 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
stapsreadsA light and fluffy lesbian romance concerning a pair of ex-lovers who meet after some years of separation when one of them comes to tile the other's offices, with her male partner. Business partner, obviously - except it's apparently not obvious. Hilarity ensues.
It was not nearly so badly written as I feared it might be looking at the extremely amateurish cover. Apart from a shortage of commas, as in 'Thank you for listening Toni' (is this some sort of Australian convention I'm not aware of?), there wasn't much to complain about so far as the writing was concerned.
The story itself was rather insubstantial, and felt like it needed more than the single plot thread to keep it together (it would have been interesting, for example, to have learned some more about some of the protagonists' other friends). It rather felt as if there wasn't nearly as much conflict as was needed, and, indeed, as there could have been.
All that said, though, it was just the thing I needed for a miserable afternoon in bed with the flu.
http://www.bookcrossing.com/journal/10200619
It was not nearly so badly written as I feared it might be looking at the extremely amateurish cover. Apart from a shortage of commas, as in 'Thank you for listening Toni' (is this some sort of Australian convention I'm not aware of?), there wasn't much to complain about so far as the writing was concerned.
The story itself was rather insubstantial, and felt like it needed more than the single plot thread to keep it together (it would have been interesting, for example, to have learned some more about some of the protagonists' other friends). It rather felt as if there wasn't nearly as much conflict as was needed, and, indeed, as there could have been.
All that said, though, it was just the thing I needed for a miserable afternoon in bed with the flu.
http://www.bookcrossing.com/journal/10200619
